Sta.sh
...It's like a thousand years ago,
I was some kind of emperor...
I sat in royal palace room.
While looking to a fragile mirror.
Devoted servants, guards around.
They do whatever I require.
They know My Everything, I think…
But they will never say a word.
If only I could get somebody,
To celebrate my kingdom coming.
To break my loneliness forever.
To realize my human nature.
To be my queen in time of days.
And be my lover through the nights.
I had to travel back in time
To understand this simple thing…
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To understand this simple thing…" I like that line ^_^
That aside, I think this poem's choice of words and structure is very simple, yet the emotion it conveys is well expressed, honest, real and very raw. It shows emotional poetry at its simplest. I like it ^_^
This is the line that I think is most powerful. It is echoed by everyone who's ever thought, "Why doesn't anyone understand me" and fits perfectly into a forlorn poem.